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热心网友 时间：3分钟前

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I am no longer a good girl, and I cannot find the way home.

I got through the city centre and ran across the zebra-crossing with my little Teddy-bear.

At last, I stood on the crowded street.
The city was like an interlaced maze, where I got lost.

Rains fell down from the dark sky.
Cars passed by in front of me.
Nobody could see a tear rolling down my cheek.

Teddy asked me when we would get home.
How could I answer it?

I was a girl, who had ambitions for my studies and ideals.
I was a girl, who used to be in a good mood with a smile on my face.
I was a girl, who knew what she had to do and what was good for her.
I was a girl, who…

God is a clown. He likes making jokes with the children who are intractable.

I tried to find someone who could help me, but where was he/she?
I tried to find the way home, but where was the way?
Who could tell me?...

I kept running and running, no matter how tired I was.
Finally, I hurt my knee when I fell down on the ground, and fell asleep in the cold corner.

That is not my youth or my life. And I cannot give up finding myself.
But, when and where will I see the sunshine?

热心网友 时间：7分钟前

i am no longer a good girl, and i can't find my way back home.
I got through the city centre, and ran across the zebra-crossing with my little Teddy-bear.
Finally, I stood on the crowded street.
The city looked like an interlaced maze, I lost myself in it.
Rain fell down from the dark sky.
in front of me, cars passed by
Nobody could see tears was rolling down my cheek.
Teddy asked me when we would get home.
How could I answer it?
I was a girl, who had ambitions for study and future.
I was a girl, who used to with a smile on my face.
I was a girl, who knew how should i do and what was good for me ,
I was a girl, who…
God was a clown. he always made some jokes with troublesome children.
I tried to find someone who could help me, but i can't?
I tried to find my way back home, and i also cant't?
Who can tell me?...

I kept running and running, no matter how tired I was.
Finally, I hurt my knee when I fell down on the ground, then fell asleep in the cold corner.

this was not my life. I cannot stop finding myself.
and, when and where will I see the sunshine?

热心网友 时间：5分钟前

I am no longer a good girl, and I cannot find the way back to home.

I went through the city centre and ran across the zebra-crossing with my little Teddy-bear.
At last, I stood on the crowded street.
The city looked like an interlaced maze, I had got lost in it.

Rains fell down from the dark sky.
Cars passed by in front of me.
Nobody could see tears were rolling down on my cheek.

Teddy asked me when we will go home.
How should I answer it?

I am a girl, who had ambitions for studies and ideals.
I am a girl, who used to be in a good mood and with smile on the face.
I am a girl, who knew what I should do and what is good for me.
I am a girl, who…

God is a clown. He likes to make joke with intractable children.
I tried to find someone could help me, but where is he/she?
I tried to find the way back to home, but where is it?
Who can tell me?

I kept running and running, no matter how tired I am.
Finally, my knee was hurt when I fell down on the ground, then I felled asleep in the cold corner.

That is not my youth, my life. I cannot give up finding myself.
But, when and where I can see the sunshine?